Saturday, March 16, 2013

Vagabond

5 comments:

  1. Well done. Id like to read more like that.

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  2. ' <----whoops dropped an apostrophe...

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  3. Great dialogue, Ken! Very 'Twilight Zone'. I was almost expecting the cab to disappear.
    Keep it up.

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  4. I like your dialogue. It flowed, and it felt intimate inside of the cab. Excellent work.

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  5. Very atmospheric. Thanks for sharing this.

    I love your page numbering system, too!

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